Fixing Genius Option C: Consult the Mouse Part 2

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Fixing Genius Option C: Consult the Mouse

The mouse might be the only other sane creature in the room. Although you won’t look sane consulting your little guide, who cares? You’re not the one who electrocuted the most expensive piece of equipment in the mansion.

“Pardon me,” you excuse yourself and step away from the waiting Scholars. They eye you with varying degrees of curiosity but look away when one yelps. A short, pudgy Scholar tried to touch the scope again.

Good grief, you’d think they’d stop after the first few tries.

Crouching down, you hold your palm out to your left pant leg.

A tiny whiskered nose peeks out to sniff your hand. Then the creature scampers onto your palm.

“What a predicament,” you mutter as the mouse’s tiny claws dig into your skin.

“Marcus!”

You jump. It’s Edwin. He must have walked over while you were waiting for the mouse to emerge. The Scholar looks over your shoulder with a scowl.

“Back to your room!” He shakes a finger at the mouse.

Marcus’ small body shakes and-pop -he disappears.

“Now hold on,” you say, “I’ve a few questions for Marcus.”

Pop! The mouse is back in your palm. You shiver a bit. How did Marcus know to come back?

Edwin’s mouth pinches like a lemon’s clamped his jaw shut. Clearly he didn’t call the mouse back.

“Mice are never allowed in the upper rooms,” he shouts.

All the Scholar’s heads pop up like dogs after a scent. “Mice?”

Their attention’s broken by a loud snap!

Lightening zaps the metal rods on the roof, races down the cable and sparks on the telescope.

The Massidion sizzles and turns from its usual dark mahogany color to a deep ruby red.

Edwin races back to join his colleagues chattering about overloading the darned scope.

You turn back to Marcus, who’s crouched tight against your palm.

“What are my options?” you ask.

Marcus scrunches up his narrow face and his gray fur stands on end. It kind of looks like he’s going to poop in your palm.

Pop! he disappears only to reappear at your feet with a poof of hair.

He scrunches up again and pop–he’s half way across the floor.

Teleporting mouse!

Now you know how the mice show up in town right after something breaks. You glance at Edwin but he’s still chattering with the other Scholars and has completely forgotten you and the mouse.

Marcus appears in your palm again and flops on his side. His sides heave with breath.

“Tires them out going a few feet,” says a woman.

She’s detached from the group and looks at Marcus like he’s a beloved pet.

You frown, “So they can’t make it to Mandril?”

Her eyes grow round, “Good heavens no! We boost their ability for that.” she glances at the scope, which is throbbing like a hot branding iron now.

“You boost them?’

The woman bites her thumb and glances guiltily at her colleagues.

So between the natural abilities of the mice and the Scholar’s sticky static, they could teleport a mouse to town. Poor Marcus must have run the distance this last time. Without the Scholar’s static, he wouldn’t have been able to teleport far enough.

What would happen if the Scholars were super charged?

“Were you trying to teleport a person?”

The woman squeaks and scampers away.

They’ll never admit it but you know this is why they wanted supercharged sticky static.

The sky above the glass roof arcs with vibrant tendrils of lightening. The streaks collide and shoot into the metal rods, ending with a sizzle along the scope.

There’s your biggest problem. The attraction to the metal rods continues to draw lightening and every time it strikes, the scope throbs more with energy.

Massidion can hold a lot but there are stories about it exploding when over used.

Oh no…

The Scholar’s chatter about overloading the scope makes sense now.

If nothing else, you need to stop the lightening from charging the scope.

But how when the whole system’s electrifying.

Take out the rods?

Disconnect the cable?

Ground the telescope with something?

A Scholar yelps and shucks his apron as it goes up in flames.

The rain pelts the roof above you.

The Scholars aren’t going to be happy with you no matter what you do. The want their sticky static back but you can’t guarantee it’ll return to them when you cut the power.

The scope glows a deep ruby red.

Something needs to be done before it explodes.

Do you attempt to…

Cc. Remove the rods?

Cd. Cut the Cable?

or

Ce. Ground the Scope?

Blessings,

Jennifer

(Please post a comment with your choice. Heads up, after feedback, one vote per comment per day please but comment as much as you like=) This makes counting votes easier. Voting will end at 8pm Mountain Time Thursday. Friday I’ll post whichever option gets the most votes and we’ll see how the adventure ends!)

21 thoughts on “Fixing Genius Option C: Consult the Mouse Part 2

  1. Jessica Ischy says:

    Ground the scope. It will stop the electricity from flowing to anyone else.

  2. mom & dad says:

    Ce seems to simple and could it energize the ground, since this is a land that is often not found? One must take a step of faith and see where it leads but only after hearing the One that truly leads.

    Ce

  3. JARVIS CLAN says:

    I say Cf make the idiot scholars remove the rods that should make for some real entertainment. However since that is not an option that I see is available to me. I’ll pick ground the scope and hope it gets this situation under control. “Ce”

    The self electrocuting idiot scholars are hilarious I almost don’t want to help it stop. And of course the mouse is very cute but rather mute, don’t know that consulting him helped me at all, though I did vote that why myself. And the squeaking scampering woman has me wondering about what exactly went on here pre my arrival. Great job. CJ

  4. JARVIS CLAN says:

    Your descriptions of the scholar’s obvious lack of intelligence in dealing with the scope, is very amusing, and clear. Mice do seem to move in this fashion don’t they? But thankfully they don’t, or mouse traps would cease to work altogether. I vote “Ce” ground the scope it seems the most logical, though watching these guys light themselves on fire is funny almost too funny to stop.
    In answer to your blog question, I have been considering starting a blog for some time; if I do you will be one of the first to know, if you’d like.

    KJ

  5. JARVIS CLAN says:

    “These guys are not very bright,
    I believe that now with all my might,
    when they keep on touching the red throbbing scope,
    leaving them alive is now my new dearest hope.
    They keep on ranting about their ‘sticky static.’
    I wish they’d be silent so I can be pragmatic.
    The end I see coming by messing with rods;
    will have me playing against the odds,
    Cutting the cable seems fine for now,
    but when I try it they’ll never allow,
    and messing with scholars that boost vermin teleportation
    is never good by me, though its quite a temptation.
    So I have to go with grounding the thing,
    sure hope I’m not wearing a conductive ring.”

    That’s “Ce” SJ

  6. JARVIS CLAN says:

    Ground the scope “Ce”. Strange scholars or not I like being in this room with so much going on. JJ

  7. JARVIS CLAN says:

    I say ground the scope. “Ce” I like the way this story seems to flow right along, it’s fun. PJ

  8. JARVIS CLAN says:

    I say ground the scope “Ce” It is probably the safest. GJ

  9. JARVIS CLAN says:

    I’m gonna cut the cable, just gotta time it so I don’t get electrocuted. “Cd” ZJ

  10. JARVIS CLAN says:

    I say ground the cable “Ce”. Seems the most safe. FJ

  11. molliebond says:

    Ground the Scope seems to be the popular option, and the one I would have chosen first. But I’m up for a good adventure, and the last one didn’t turn out so well when we tended to vote the same way. So in hopes to cheat the system, I’m voting for C.d., Cut the Cables. Can’t wait for the next…shocking…installment.

  12. lsebring says:

    I say ground it but be careful no need to go flying a cross the room :) Ce

  13. Rohman kids says:

    We say try to ground the scope.

  14. Jackie Stein says:

    Ground the scope. Please don’t die….

  15. Chelsesa says:

    I guess, remove the rods? It all seems pretty risky!

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