Remain Unseen Part Three

If you missed the first two parts in the story, you can click to the left on part one and two and then return here, Or here’s a quick run down.

Menna spies on Duke Milens, who killed the king and is now trying to take the throne, and finds out the Duke has yet to pay the assassin, Lord Sheruk. She was caught spying and Lord Gered saves her from being captured. (He was sent by Menna’s maid, Hilga). This part opens on Menna and Gered arriving back at where Hilga and Princess Cicyllia are waiting.

And now for the end of the story. Enjoy=)

Remain Unseen Part Three

“Ah, Gered,” Hilga greeted Menna’s companion with a giant hug.

Menna scowled at the woman. “Didn’t trust me?”

“My Lady, I trust you implicitly. I just like to have backup plans, which, judging from Gered’s presence, was fortunate this evening.”

Menna snorted. Gered’s escape had involved rappelling down the tower until they reached a lower floor. Then entering the palace through a window and using the tunnels from there. She was still reeling from the crazy decent.

“Gered?” Menna asked, “Lord Gered Monter?”

He swept her an accomplished bow. She blushed horribly. Of all people to see her inept moment, it had to be the man who led the king’s elite force.

“Never thought I’d see a Lady climb better than my men,” he grinned at her.

“Hate heights,” she muttered.

“Never would’ve guessed.”

Oh… She bit her tongue before she said something truly embarrassing. He’d already heard her squawk when they repeled.

“I’ve got an idea,” she turned away from them and joined Princess Cicyllia in front of the tent the Princess slept in.

“Heard something useful?” Hope filled the Princess’ eyes.

“I did. Lord Sheruk provided the poison that killed your father and he hasn’t been paid for the service. He’s supposed to meet the Duke tomorrow night but I’m thinking we confront Sheruk first…”

Hilga and Gered joined them as she outlined her plan.

***

Lord Sheruk loved his brandy. It was a well known fact, he usually took a glass into his study every evening after supper to enjoy an hour to himself.

Menna shifted to the right on her perch and carefully let down the filament overtop the man’s glass. He was staring out the window and his glass sat lightly in his hand on the arm of his chair.

When the filament was close enough, she squeezed a few drops onto the tiny fiber from her necklace. It wasn’t Mettadon this time but something Hilga said would paralyze. Hilga was turning into a wealth of knowledge about such things. It was a bit disturbing but Menna didn’t question her. She was just glade the woman was on their side.

Lord Sheruk took a drink and the first drop hit the arm of his chair. Menna winced. She shifted the filament to the right just a tinch as he rested his glass again.

Several drops hit the brandy. It was enough. Menna pulled up the filament and waited. Her part was done for now.

Sheruk took a sip and picked up a book he’d had resting on his knee. Another sip. He set his glass down to turn a page and then picked it back up to rest on the arm of the chair.

Another sip.

The book tilted and then thumped to the floor. Lord Sheruk’s head tilted as well. His lips worked soundlessly. Menna frowned. The drug shouldn’t affect his ability to speak. They needed him to be able to converse.

A curse whispered from his lips just as the door opened and Gered slipped into the study.

“Lord Sheruk, I’m not sure we’ve met,” he moved a chair over so he could sit in Sheruk’s line of sight.

“No,” Sheruk whispered.

“Then let me introduce myself. I’m the man hired to kill you.”

Another whispered curse.

“Yes, I could kill you and be paid by the end of the night but I’ve a problem, what’s to say Duke Milens doesn’t betray me like he’s betraying you? Plus, I kinda like the Princess. She hires an assassin, she pays up front. It’s just better for business.”

“True,” Sheruk agreed. His voice, although slow as always, came out stronger than before. Hilga warned the paralytic wouldn’t last long.

“So I’ve a proposal. I’m assuming, one assassin to another, that you used Cerroline on the King, which, as we both know, leaves a slight discoloration under the eye lids. Hard to detect but not impossible. How about, at the coronation, you reveal the Duke’s darker side. The healers who examined him after death can confirm the discoloration. They just didn’t know what caused it.”

Sheruk’s jaw worked as he eyed Gered. “You’ll kill me if I don’t agree?”

Gered gave his lopsided grin. It was far more appealing when it wasn’t aimed at her in derision.

“Yes. And keep in mind, you’ve never met me before because I’m good at what I do. I can kill you at the coronation just as easily as I can kill you now, if you decide to… renege on our agreement.”

Don’t call the bluff. Menna watched the play of thought through Sheruk’s eyes. He was far smarter than she ever gave him credit for.

“You’ve a deal,” he said.

***

The Duke got his wish. The hall was packed for the coronation. Menna watched from a tunnel in the wall behind the throne.

Lord Gered Monter had pulled his weight for this. He’d brought in his men, anticipating the Duke running when Sheruk confronted him.  Gered stationed his men at all the doors as commoners. Menna kinda hoped Milens ran. She’d love to see him taken down in front of everyone.

A pounding sounded and the hall quieted as Duke Milens appeared at the door to the hall. A red carpet led the way to the throne, where the magister stood with a girl at his side who held the crown.

He made his way to the front, his head high and his shoulders back.

The magister started, intoning the ceremonial words. He droned on about duty and justice and…

Bla, bla, bla. Come on, come on. 

Menna leaned closer as the magister asked, “do the Lords find this man, Duke Milens, worthy to be their King?”

She’d never heard of a time the Lords said no. There was a chorus of ‘aye’ and the Magister turned to lift the crown.

What? Where’s Sheruk?

“I do not find him worthy.” The words were slow but clear. The hall gasped.

The Duke spun. “You!?”

“The Duke hired…”

Milens bolted.

He didn’t head for any of the doors, however. He darted around the throne to duck behind a yellow banner on the wall.

Menna heard a scrapping and then light filtered into her tunnel. Another entrance? It had to be. She’d never tried to get into the tunnels from the throne room, so she’d never really looked for such an entrance.

The scrapping came again and her tunnel went dark.

He’ll get away.

None of Gered’s men were stationed in the tunnels. The Duke had free reign of the passages to escape.

Menna scootched out of her little cubby and crawled until she reached the larger tunnel Milens had just passed through. Then she ran after him. His pounding feet thumped in the hall ahead. Turning a corner, she spotted his back as his cape flared behind him.

Gotcha.

She darted into a side passage and turned right, then left and came out in front of him. Pulling a dagger, she sucked herself tight against the wall and listened to the Duke’s pounding feet.

He whooshed past her and she swung. The butt of her dagger made a satisfying thwap against the back of his head. He went down on his face and didn’t move.

“Smooth,” said a voice.

Menna grinned, “I do what I can.”

Gered nudged the Duke with a toe. “That’s gonna leave one splendid headache.”

Menna shared a lopsided grin with him. “So we’ve got a room full of people, think we can coronate a Queen?”

The End

Blessings and have a wonderful weekend,

Jennifer

P.S. I love feedback, so if anyone has suggestions, questions, or comments on what they like or what doesn’t seem to work, please let me know. Just be gentle to my poor thin skinned feelings. Thanks.

Remain Unseen Part Two

If you missed Monday, just know that Menna the spy is climbing the outside of the palace, by way of a banner, to spy on the evil duke, who’s trying to take over the Kingdom after killing the king. Menna works for Princess Cicyllia.

Now on with the adventure=)

Remain Unseen Part Two

Climb!

It was another moment before her limbs obeyed. Scaling upward until she came even with the fourth floor windows, she grasped a wad of fabric and rolled her bracelet from her wrist to around the wad. Then she cinched the bracelet, creating a ball.

Climbing higher, she wedged the ball between her feet and stood on it. It wasn’t ideal but it created a small hold so she could rest one arm at a time.

The window directly to her right entered into the west room.

She hadn’t been sure if she’d be able to hear anything from inside. It was the gamble she’d played.

At first all she heard was the wind whistling and the flutter of the banner.

“…needs to be packed.”

Menna sighed. Duke Milens voice.

“We hired the criers. By tomorrow night the whole city’ll know the date and time.”

This new voice she didn’t know.

“Then it’s settled,” Duke Milens said, “by the end of the week everything’ll be done and I’ll be on the throne. Good evening, gentlemen.”

She’d missed the whole meeting. Disappointment knotted in her stomach. All this effort and she’d timed it wrong. The coronation was confirmed but that didn’t help. The whole city would know about it by the morning.

She started to lower herself and froze.

“I’m still waiting,” said a slow, purposeful voice. “You messed up when Lady Addina and Lady Merlow died too. Now there’re questions. I want payment and I’ll be gone.”

Menna frowned. The voice was familiar but who?

“My dear Lord Sh…”

“Now, Milens. I’m in no position to be patient.”

Lord Sheruk!

Menna never wouldn’t guessed Sheruk was the assassin. She’d always thought him a bit slow.

“Come back tomorrow for your thrity…”

“Fifty…”

“We agreed…”

“We agreed per body.” Sheruk interupted. “You messed up and killed three, not one. Fifty’s a discount.”

“You insisted the Cerroline would only affect the King.”

“I said it’d only affect someone taking Giscerin. I warned you the King might not be the only one taking the med.”

“Get out. If tomorrow’s not soon enough, then go hang yourself.”

There was a snort and then the stomp of feet.

The chill wind shifted against Menna’s face. Her fingers were already numb.

A bark sounded in the room.

Daft, not again!

A head peeked out below. She barely swirled around in time not to be seen but Duke Milen’s looked out the window to her right just as she moved. He saw the banner move if not her. He grabbed the banner and shook it.

Menna’s world spun and her hands slid as the fabric snapped back and forth.

Milens growled at her.

“SPY!” he shouted.

Menna heard the chaos of more shouting and another bark but her head was spinning with the height. She tried to climb higher but Milens was joined by a guard from the other window and between the two of them, the banner was flapped and ripped from her hands.

She grabbed blindly and caught a handful of fabric. Pulling herself in, she held tight. Something smacked her shoulder. She turned her face away form whatever new device Milens was using to dislodge her.

It smacked her other side.

What?

It was a rope with a stick tied to the end hanging from above.

She didn’t question her sudden fortune. She grabbed the rope and placed her feet on the stick. As soon as her weight left the banner it snapped free and Milens cursed. The banner fluttered by her, cut from above.

The rope swung as someone pulled her up. Menna hid her face against her shoulder so she didn’t have to see the falling banner or the ground far below.

“Grab the parapet,” a low voice ordered.

Menna looked and grabbed hold, not taking the time to consider the move. Hands clasped her shoulders, then the waist of her pants and finally she sprawled across the roof.

“Graceful,” she muttered.

“Truly ladylike,” said a man. He wore gray that blended perfectly with the palace stone as he hauled the rope up. Another spy?

“Who’re you?” Menna asked. She’d never seen him before, she was sure of it. She’d remember that distinctive arch to his brows.

He shot her a crooked grin and pulled a white handkerchief from his pocket. “A friend.”

“Does my friend have a way down?”

“Maybe, but you’re not gonna like it.”

Shouts came from across the palace walls. There was only one way down from the tower and it was a walkway leading across the palace to the east tower. In the middle of the walkway was a staircase. Men emerged from within and started up those stairs.

“We only have a few minutes,” Menna said, “I don’t have to like your plan, it just has to work.”

He gave her another crooked grin as he held up the rope. “Let’s go then.”

To be Finished on Friday…

Blessings,

Jennifer

P.S. I love feedback, so if anyone has suggestions, questions, or comments on what they like or what doesn’t seem to work, please let me know. Just be gentle to my poor thin skinned feelings. Thanks.

Remain Unseen Part One

A few weeks ago I ran a story titled To Be Unseen involving the spy Menna. I heard from several people the story wasn’t long enough, so here’s a continuation of Menna’s adventures.

If you missed To Be Unseen, you can either click on the title under categories and read the story or here’s the cliff notes version.

Menna goes to spy on Duke Milens for Princess Cicyllia and overhears a plot to have the king killed. Before she can warn anyone, she’s caught due to the Duke’s use of dogs and ends up taking Mettadon, which makes her appear dead. When she wakes, she finds the king is already dead and the Princess is being held in the palace. She rescues the Princess and they escape to the Burning with the help of Menna’s maid, Hilga.

Now on to this week’s story. Enjoy=)

Remain Unseen Part One

“This is insanity, My Lady,” Hilga tossed a pair of pants at Menna and shuffled to the second dresser to find a shirt.

Menna held up the pants and scowled. She envied Hilga’s simple maroon dress but it wouldn’t do to crawl in the palace’s tunnels in a dress.

“I can’t be seen, Hilga, you know that. Besides, weren’t you the one to suggest I wear men’s clothing?”

Hilga pitched a shirt at her.

“You look dashing in men’s attire, My Lady. It’s insanity to enter the palace. You’re supposed to be dead.”

It’d been a month since the king’s untimely death and Menna’s rescue of the princess.

“The Duke had dinner with Lord Yomen last night, right?” Menna asked.

“That’s what his coach driver said.”

“Lord Yomen agreed to support him.”

Hilga nodded.

Duke Milens had been solidifying his control of the city since the King’s death. Although he was in line for the throne, the fact that Princess Cicyllia lived and there had been rumor of her marrying made his claim a bit shaky. Both parties had equal right to the throne. Rumor now spoke of his move for a coronation. It would be the last move in his game for control.

Menna needed details. Princess Cicyllia could reclaim the crown but only if they had a way to expose the Duke.

Menna was working on that. Cicyllia was working on the people, maintaining her good name by feeding the poor and aiding in building projects.

“Think Cicyllia’s all right?” Menna asked as she doned the pants and shirt.

“The girl’s marvelous. A day alone in the Burning’s not gonna bother her.” Hilga held out two daggers so Menna could strap them to her calves.

If Duke Milens found Cicyllia, they’d all be up a creek. So far she only showed up in public where he couldn’t do anything to her and they hid her in the Burning at night. A forest east of the city that burned ages ago. People avoided the blackened husks of trees because they creaked in the wind. People claimed the trees were haunted.

Menna loved it. When the moon rose, it cast the tall spires in silvery light and the creak meant safety to her.

After faking her death, she couldn’t return home as Lady Menna Raydon. So she was as stuck in the trees as the Princess.

“The Duke’s meeting tonight–you’re sure it’s in the west room?” Hilga held up a heart shaped locket and Menna turned as she pulled her hair to the side so the woman could clasp it around her neck. She added a string bracelet to her adornment.

“As sure as I can be.”

“Insanity,” Hilga grunted as she folded her arms around her ample self in distaste.

Menna hugged her before leaving. Without her provision of supplies, they would’ve starved a month ago.

***

The palace glowed under the full moon like a gray blob with narrow black holes for windows.

Cicyllia loved the place but Menna couldn’t see why. It was ugly.

But her Lady wanted it back so Menna crawled in the trench that used to be a moat until she reached the bridge and then she used its cover to reach the gate.

The Duke kept the gate open to keep up appearances of ‘all’s well’ but he’d beefed up the guard.

A man passed with a black dog at his heels.

Dogs, great.

Menna tied a a handkerchief to the chains of the gate and hid again underneath to wait. The tread of the guard returned but paused. A dog sniffed loudly right above her and then the beast sneezed.

“All right, Ignor?” the guard asked and then chuckled as he walked away with the dog.

Hilga had soaked the handkerchief in something which she swore would deaden a dog’s smell.

Let’s hope it works.

Menna pulled herself onto the bridge and darted toward the palace wall.

No warning bark sounded. Finding a ground level trap door by the north tower, she lifted the latch and lowered herself in.

Lighting a lantern, she saw the underground tunnel still had small scuff marks from her last visit a month earlier. It didn’t look like any one but herself and the Princess had passed since.

She navigated toward the west room, which was a small meeting room that showcased oil pantings from the 2nd Dynasty.

It was favored for secret meetings precisely because it was difficult to spy on. It sat high on the west wing where the walls were thick and solid. There were no passages that Menna knew of. Nor were there balconies to climb to or tapestries to hide behind. It was a circular room with paintings on the walls. That was it.

Using the service halls, she made her way to the third floor of the tower. From there every staircase was guarded by two men and a black dog. The Duke must think himself very clever posting those dogs every where.

Menna dropped another handkerchief before hoisting herself up into the narrow window. It was a good thing she was small. The windows in the palace halls and stairwells were only wide enough to shoot an arrow through. They weren’t made for sight seeing and they definitely weren’t made to enter or exit through.

But Menna was frail in stature and she had room to spare as she slid sideways.

She looked down the outside of the palace and her head swam.

Maybe Hilga’s right.

She’d never had a head for heights but this was the only way she could think of to spy on the Duke.

Don’t look down.

She braced against the window frame, hoping the vertigo would calm. Finally it did and she reached out into the night.

Duke Milens had draped the walls with black and yellow banners. Black for morning the King. Yellow for the Duke’s crest.

It was something the King never would’ve done. Menna suspected he knew of the security rick such banners posed. Apparently the Duke didn’t think of it.

Menna snagged the edge of a banner. For being small, she was strong. Now she just couldn’t look down. Grasping the back of the banner, she swung free of the window. Logic told her the banner was secure, it had to be because it was heavy, but just because her mind said the banner would hold didn’t mean her body understood. Air hissed from her lunges and she barely kept from screaming as she hit the wall.

Don’t look down. Don’t look down. Don’t lo…

She looked and froze.

Dumb girl!

Her vision swam and her hands started to sweat.

Climb!

To Be Continued on Wednesday…

Blessings,

Jennifer

P.S. I love feedback, so if anyone has suggestions, questions, or comments on what they like or what doesn’t seem to work, please let me know. Just be gentle to my poor thin skinned feelings. Thanks.

Mystery of the Magic Option Aa: Confront Edwin

Wednesday’s voting was really close but the vote swung to confront the crazy scholar. So here we go. Enjoy=)

(If you missed the first two posts, click to the left under recent posts on Mystery of the Magic and Option A to catch up, and then return here.)

Mystery of the Magic Option Aa: Confront Edwin

One thing’s for sure. Edwin stole the mouse from your cabin. It’s been a whole two months since the explosion and the mice don’t leave unless they’re with you, so this mouse didn’t leave on its own.

“Scholar Edwin,” you step into the glade.

Edwin spins and gawks at you.

“You’re a bit far from the mansion,” you say.

“Mansion! Mansion! What Mansion?” He jumps from one foot to the other. “Can no longer see Mansion without–” He cuts off sharply as you lean over to pick up the cage. “No! That’s mine.”

Before he can stop you, you open the cage and the mouse scampers free. You pull out the other object and let it sit in your palm. It’s an uncharged piece of Massidion. The mahogany colored stone sits smooth and cool against your skin.

Edwin freezes, staring at the Massidion like you’ve a snake in your hand. “That’s not mine.”

“Really? Than I’ll just take it back to town and give it to Mr. Owen, who can sell it to help rebuild his barn.”

There’s no surprise on his face. He knows about the barn burning down. Interesting, the Scholars avoid Mandril like it was beneath them.

But he looks horrified at the prospect of loosing the Massidion.

“Tell me what happened at the barn and I’ll give this back,” you say.

He jumps back and forth, staring at you hand. “Wasn’t me,” he whines, “wasn’t me.”

“But you know what happened.”

He nods but continues to jump back and forth.

You just wait. Getting information from the Scholars has always been like this. But when he doesn’t explain after a good few minutes, you close your hand around the stone and turn to walk away.

“Wait!”

You look back.

“The static rushed to the least tainted sources.”

What in the world is he saying?

“Kids! It diffused into all the kids!”

“Okay…”

“They play in the barn. Barn goes boom!” Edwin jumps on boom and throws his arms wide.

Considering your own hazardous experiments with the static, what he says makes sense. But it doesn’t explain how charged Massidion ended up in the barn too.

“You don’t have any static, do you, Edwin?”

He goes really still, like a cornered animal.

“And you’re trying to get it back?”

Edwin screams and bolts. You let him go.

By charging the Massidion with a mouse and then placing it where the kids would play with it, Edwin might be able to get his static back because the Massidion would pull it from whatever kid touched it. It was a huge might with a lot of chances but it sounds like something the scholars would do.

You turn to go home and find the kid, a young boy, watching you.

“Don’t touch any thing like this,” you hold the Massidion up. “And be super careful with the static.”

The boy nods and runs away.

You hope he and the others will find you later since you didn’t punish him. Revealing the kid’s magic to the town might be a bad idea. The people of Mandril really dislike magic. So you decide to keep that to yourself.

On your way back, you concoct a story for Mr. Owen that involves an experiment by the scholars gone wrong that the kids got ahold of, thus burning down the barn.

Mr. Owens accepts the story without question and seems relieved when you offer to clean up the ash. He’s thrilled when you hand him the Massidion, telling him it’s payment from the Scholars for their experiment.

Then you head home for some much needed sleep. You find five mice curled up on the hearth rug when you arrive.

The End

Blessings and thanks for participating this week,

Jennifer

(P.S. Monday’s a continuation of Menna the spy, so stop in for her new adventure=) )

Mystery of the Magic Option A: Focus on the Ash

If you missed the start to Mystery of the Magic, click on it to left under recent posts and then return here for the second part of the adventure. And be sure to vote at the end for how you’d like the story to continue!

Otherwise, welcome and enjoy=)

Mystery of the Magic Option A: Focus on the Ash

Most of the town has returned to their homes and the person who ran into the forest is gone. You look at your bucket full of red ash and decide to start there.

When you get to your cabin, you shut the door and pull the curtains closed, figuring no one will think twice because they’ll assume you’re sleeping after helping put out the fire.

Finding a white handkerchief, you sit down in front of the cold hearth and pour a bit of the ash onto the cloth. Then you carefully spread it out with a stick.

It’s definitely ash even though it’s red but there seem to be bits of larger debris too. You separate one of these larger pieces and poke at it with the stick, then you reach to pick it up. Static zaps from you and you pull back.

The piece of debris turns a little more red.

You know that color. The telescope in the mansion glowed that color when charged. This has to be Massidion, the same material as the scope. It’s the only material your know of that can hold magic…

You sit back on your heels in thought. The chances of a random piece of Massidion sitting in Mr. Owen’s barn are remote. Plus, Massidion wouldn’t pull static from you unless it was already charged.

There’s a twittering and you look over to see Marcus. He’s joined by three other mice, who snuggle up to your leg. You never would have thought mice could be good pets but these are different. They’re intelligent and helpful.

But they don’t usually all snuggle unless something’s wrong. You count again. Only four mice. You had five.

“Where’s your brother, Marcus?”

The mouse disappears with a pop and then reappears a second later with a bunch of leaves in its mouth. Then he pops again and the other three mice follow suite.

Leaves? It had to mean the forest. You scoop up the handkerchief and dump all the ash back in the bucket before heading out.

The forest surrounds the town, so it takes you only a few minutes to reach the trees. Once inside them, the four mice appear around your feet.

“Okay, now what?” you ask.

Marcus pulls at your pant leg and scampers away. You follow until you reach an open glade right next to the river. The mouse twitters and sits on his haunches. You kneel beside him as you watch whoever’s next to the river.

It looks like a man but he’s sitting with his back to you, so you can’t immediately see what he’s doing. He jumps up with a shouted, “now, you dumb critter! Now!”

It’s Edwin, one of the Scholars. He kicks an object at his feet and it flies through the air.

The mice whimper.

The object’s a cage and, as it comes to land closer to you, you see the fifth mouse is inside. There’s a round object with him but you’re not sure what it is until Edwin picks the cage up and shouts at the mouse.

“Charge it! Now! or I’ll send you flying through the air again!”

The mouse pops like he’s teleporting away but he only rattles against the bars of the cage. Whatever the cage is made of, he can’t get out.

“Charge it!”

The object’s got to be another piece of Massidion. But the only reason Edwin would need a mouse to charge it is if his sticky static didn’t return when the mansion exploded.

You look at your hands and watch the sizzle along your fingers that you’re just now getting used to.

Why would he want a mouse to charge the Massidion though? The mouse’s abilities wouldn’t give him back his static.

You see movement out of the corner of your eye. Crouched in the bushes to your right is a kid from Mandril wearing a brown coat. It’s the same brown that you saw this morning.

Why would a kid be here? The kid’s fixated on Edwin and hasn’t seen you.

Do you…

Aa. Confront Edwin?

Ab. Talk to the kid?

Or

Ac. Try to save the mouse?

Blessings and hope to see you Friday for the conclusion of our adventure,

Jennifer

(Please post a comment with your choice. One vote per post please but comment as much as you like=) This makes counting votes easier. Voting will end at 8pm Mountain Time Thursday. I’ll post whichever option gets the most votes on Friday and we’ll see how the adventure ends!)

Mystery of the Magic

We’re back to a new adventure where the reader gets to vote on how the story continues!

A while ago I ran an adventure by the name of Fixing Genius. The general consensus afterward was that it wasn’t long enough. So…here’s a sequel adventure.

If you missed Fixing Genius you can either click on it under categories or here’s the cliff notes version.

Fixing Genius: You’re a repair person for the crazy Scholars of the Mansion. You go to fix something for them only to find out they’re magicians and they’ve charged their prized telescope with their ‘sticky static,’ a magic much like electricity. Then they rigged it to be shocked by lightening. You try to ground the scope but in the process it explodes and you’re saved by their teleporting mice. You wake to find you now have the sticky static and the mice follow you home.

Now on to the new adventure=) Enjoy.

Mystery of the Magic

There’s a twittering and scrapping. You crack one eye open to find yourself nose to nose with a mouse.

“Gah! Marcus.” You sit up and pause as someone bangs on the door.

Marcus scampers away to hide under your bed.

It’s the middle of the night. Maybe the Scholars need something fixed. You shake your head. That can’t be. Ever since the top floor of their mansion blew up in an experiment gone wrong they’ve avoided the entire town of Mandril, including its repair people.

Groaning, you toss back the covers and throw your robe over your shoulders before opening the door.

“What?”

“Town’s on fire,” shouts the girl standing there.

“Coming.”

You exchange your robe for your heavier cloak and grab two buckets before rushing out the door.

Sure enough, there’s smoke coming from the north side of town but luckily it’s not the ‘town’, it’s a barn. Joining the water line, you add your buckets to the chain and start passing full buckets for empty ones.

Water sloshes as you pass left. Empty buckets get thrown right. Back and forth. Back and forth.

Dawn’s peeking over the horizon by the time the fire’s completely out. Exhausted, you turn toward home as your buckets hit your legs. You’re arms are too sore to lift them clear of your stride, so you just let them hang and hit your knees.

Your skin pricks along the back of your neck.

Since the incident at the mansion, you’ve kept your latent magic a secret, only messing with it late at night as you figure out how to use it, but one thing your know for sure, your skin tingles, goes cold, flushes hot, or pricks when your magic reacts to something.

When you tried to heat water, it boiled in a flash and would have scalded you except the magic went cold along your hands and kept your skin from burning. Like it had a mind of its own and was out to protect you.

The prickling sensation grows.

You pause and stretch your shoulders a bit, looking around, but nothing seems out of place. Until your eyes come to rest on the ashes of the barn.

Most of it’s a gray smudge but where the back corner used to exist looks reddish. You blink. Trick of the eyes?

Only one way to find out. You turn around and make your way back to that corner.

It’s not a trick of the eyes. The ash is a dull red. You crouch down and rub a bit with your fingers. Your sticky static zaps between your thumb and forefinger.

Startled, you glance around to make sure no one’s watching.

A twig cracks behind you. Turning, you see a flash of brown as someone runs away into the trees. You’re about to follow when Mr. Owen, the unfortunate owner of the barn, comes up beside you. He’s looking into the forest too.

“Darned kids,” he says, “always playing around my barn. And now it’s gone.”

“You think this was a kid?”

“Most likely,” he says, running a hand through his gray hair.

“What do you think could’ve done this?” you point to the red ash.

Mr. Owen frowns and kneels like you did to rub some of the stuff between his fingers.

“Ow!” He starts backward and stares at his hand where it’s singed. “What in tarnation!?”

You look at your own hand to make sure but you’re not burned like him. You magic must have protected you. He looks at you but you only shrug.

“Just noticed it looked funny,” you explain.

“Well, do me a favor and figure this out, will you? Can’t rebuild if the ash just burns the barn down again.”

“Sure,” you say, it’s not like you have much else to do since the Scholars haven’t called in a while. “Can I take some of this? See if I can figure out what it is?”

“Take all of it if you can figure out how,” he glares at the offending ash and then stalks away. You kneel down and, making sure no one’s watching, you scoop a bunch of the ash into one of your buckets.

Then you head home, contemplating your next move. You could try to figure out what’s in the ash with your magic but it could be tricky until dark. You don’t want anyone to see you messing with magic.

You could try to figure out who ran away into the woods. There’s a good chance they know something but by now, it could be hard to find them.

Or you could ask witnesses about the fire and see if you can get anything that way but the towns people don’t exactly like magic, so they might hesitate if they saw something unusual.

So do you…

A. Focus on the Ash?

B. Follow the person in the woods?

or

C. Ask the witnesses?

Blessings,

Jennifer

(Please post a comment with your choice. Heads up, one vote per comment per day please but comment as much as you like=) This makes counting votes easier. Voting will end at 8pm Mountain Time Tuesday. I’ll post whichever option gets the most votes on Wednesday and we’ll see how the adventure continues!)

As We Think

How do you view your world? Yourself?

This post is an extension of Wednesday’s but it’s something that’s weighted on my mind recently.

What are your thoughts?

I listened to a podcast by Michael Hyatt a while ago and he spoke about being responsible for where you’re at in life. He spoke about owning the decisions you’ve made, good and bad, and accepting where you’re at in life is entirely up to how you view it.

I hear the excuses now.

“But I didn’t get that raise…”

“If my car hadn’t broken down…”

“My computer went on the fritz and I couldn’t…”

Excuses are endless but the definition of excuses is literally “seek to remove the blame, justification, or to release from an obligation or duty.” (Dictionary.com) If you live making excuses, you’re at the whim of the world.

I’ve struggled with this over the past months after setting up a writing schedule. It’s so easy to say ‘such and such prevented me from…” but even when I say that, I know deep down I’m still responsible for how I react to the world that distracts me. I can either stay up a bit late to write or I can stew in my own disappointment and frustration and go to bed angry because I didn’t get my writing done. It’s my choice.

We can control how we respond even when we can’t always control what happens to us.

Hyatt speaks about Alice Herz-Sommerthe oldest living holocaust survivor, who says the way she survived the holocaust was by being responsible for the way she responded to it. How amazing! My own petty distractions are minuscule in comparison.

And how we react starts in our minds, in the way we think. You’re never going to respond well if you’re constantly grousing in your mind about how bad things are or how annoying someone is. You may put a pretty face on it for a while but you have to live with yourself and it will taint how you act, sooner or later.

I heard this quote a few years back and it seems to pop up again and again when I start excusing my way out of owning my life. I leave you to ponder it  as I kick my soap box back into the corner. Thanks for listening=)

“Watch your thoughts, they become your words.

Watch your words, they become your actions.

Watch your actions, they become your habits.

Watch your habits, they become your character.

Watch your character, it becomes your Destiny.”

-David Stark

Blessings and have a wonderful weekend,

Jennifer

P.S. Monday starts us on a whole new adventure, so be sure to stop by=)